tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post4438872168707905281..comments2023-06-22T14:38:05.648+05:30Comments on the smiling buddha: The funeral clownAseem Gaurav Kujurhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03822149501791814340noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-50606854651411122682011-03-06T16:26:55.432+05:302011-03-06T16:26:55.432+05:30beautiful.. a story in rhyme, and a repetition in ...beautiful.. a story in rhyme, and a repetition in between that makes it more effective! well written!<br /><br />Leo.<br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow">http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-10609442372844046182009-11-05T00:06:38.126+05:302009-11-05T00:06:38.126+05:30thanks silent poet, stories make my poetry readabl...thanks silent poet, stories make my poetry readable..thanksAseem Gaurav Kujurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03822149501791814340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-804246396823775692009-11-03T18:13:20.441+05:302009-11-03T18:13:20.441+05:30Fascinating piece, You were able to make a short s...Fascinating piece, You were able to make a short story in poetic form. keep it up!Silent Poet Klaushttp://www.poemslifelove.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-10141656241950763022009-09-24T18:00:13.716+05:302009-09-24T18:00:13.716+05:30i know it just went on and on and oni know it just went on and on and onAseem Gaurav Kujurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03822149501791814340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-74182467428282429942009-09-22T23:45:06.852+05:302009-09-22T23:45:06.852+05:30yeah i listen'd to that song... nice one...
t...yeah i listen'd to that song... nice one... <br />the whole album sounds good... i thought it was just me..<br />There's a huge post to come up in mine sooner... be ready!<br /><br />BTW this was a Looooooonng Poem!!Rajashreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04100381294980716050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-10736001069206066202009-09-21T19:24:17.394+05:302009-09-21T19:24:17.394+05:30yes its incomplete in all sense..looking for answe...yes its incomplete in all sense..looking for answers, a way out....listening to "wake up sid, saare pal kahen, chal kahin chalen, saari dishaon se aa rahi aawaaj, sun sako to sun lo..."Aseem Gaurav Kujurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03822149501791814340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30167534.post-76191100706171626552009-09-21T19:19:12.484+05:302009-09-21T19:19:12.484+05:30its incomplete...
just like any life is
and yes th...its incomplete...<br />just like any life is<br />and yes the clown is right...<br />its a dilemma that life offers<br />with unique wars to fight!<br /><br />Good one... :)Rajashreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04100381294980716050noreply@blogger.com