July 29, 2010

Wings of hearts

 
Wings of hearts 

The first paragraph simply rhymed in my head out of nowhere and I build it up further to a more meaningful read. This, I would dedicate to a destiny's friend and he would know why. Interestingly, it suits me as well.


Sleep well,
Sleep well my love,
You ain't waking up tomorrow,
I'll be grieving in pain from sorrow.

You have lend me women,
Beauties of feminine,
Desirable till the paint on their nails,
Winged hearts, not meant for the jails.

My love, you dint give me enough feet,
To match up to their steps, make the ends meet,
Loving 'em in packets,
Is like warming you under the blankets.

Love, I've shared you enough,
You're one feeling that has melted the tough,
It's time I put you down to sleep,
For what I had seen for tomorrow, lost them all today in heaps.

Sleep well,
Sleep well my love,
You ain't waking up tomorrow,
I'll be grieving in pain from sorrow.

16 comments:

  1. I'd comment on each of your word,
    for me you are a writer of true Melancholy,
    seems to me like you live on the tip of a sword,
    The rest does not come in rhyme, so i leave it blank till Holi :P

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  2. I write what I have felt or have been made to feel, I am true to my feelings and their depictions through poetry.
    A woman made me a poet by chance, many others have been fodders to my further writings.
    I appreciate that you call me a writer.
    Love you!

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  3. n i wish i get a poem dedicated 2 me someday too.. ;)

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  4. unlikely for a man to be expressive.
    but here you are.

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  5. Ummie, the heart has no gender.

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  6. The feeling certainly comes through. Quite powerful. Thanks for sharing it!

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  7. Brent, love it when people actually read the feelings than the poem!

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  9. You are very eloquent in your thoughts,Superbly penned.

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  10. Thanks Singh for appreciating my work, such comments can put immense pressure on a writer. And I haven't written for over a year. :)

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  11. i think you have a nice pen so that you have done well and i hope you are so dedicated.. good luck

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  12. Thanks Vivek, I do have a nice pen!

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  13. Sleep well,

    Sleep well my love,

    ~ Beautiful. Someone, who really loves some other one, wishes such a beautiful wish.

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  14. I hope you will keep on submitting new articles or blog posts & thank you for sharing your great experience with us.

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